Monday, June 26, 2006

A Question

6 Comments:

Blogger Medusa aka expiringpoet said...

So, this poem suffers from lack of clear punctuation I realize. Gonna give it some time and return to it again to see how it can be improved further.

2:08 AM  
Blogger Pat Paulk said...

But it echoes with the ever haunting question we all hear, either near or far. And, of which we're never sure. I like it!!

7:27 AM  
Blogger Medusa aka expiringpoet said...

Thanks, Pat!
Questions pile up and gets increasingly loud and naggy now I'm older :)

2:50 PM  
Blogger Medusa aka expiringpoet said...

Peter, thank you :)

1:12 AM  
Blogger dsnake1 said...

medusa,
easily one of the best you have written. like it, esp the part about shadows to grey dust.

and the picture, so "hauntingly" appropriate.

10:38 PM  
Blogger Medusa aka expiringpoet said...

Dsnake,
thank you! Haven't done photo-poetry in a long while. I like to mix photos and poems, so i kinda miss this :)

2:05 PM  

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