Monday, August 07, 2006

Funeral of a Crow

A crow’s black corpse
On an otherwise pristine pavement
Threw me off my leisure track

Furtively I neared the crumpled body
And saw it had been savagely torn apart
Coal-bead eyes dully staring into the sky’s expanse as if wishing
It could find refuge in the wind even as it’s life flickered and was violently stilled

The coils of pink guts made bright trailing patterns
On the grey-white canvas of pavement
Soon enough other crows would come to claim the body
Beaks pecking listlessly into eyes,
Beaks pecking solemnly into guts and wings;
To take into the body
What used to be brother, and absorb into self

7 Comments:

Anonymous Anonymous said...

OMG this is great!! VERY well written! :o) Thank you so much for visiting my blog, I appreciate it A LOT! Thank you so much for your wonderful comments as well!! I love your poems! You write so beautifully, keep up the WONDERFUL work! :o)

3:57 PM  
Blogger Medusa aka expiringpoet said...

Hey Jon,
It's my pleasure to visit your site; not many people can be so dedicated at pursuing their art and have the blessings of talent to be great at what they do :) Thanks too, for appreciating this poem, it's a wonderful feeling to write and even more fantastic to have someone to understand it, as you did !

4:14 PM  
Blogger dsnake1 said...

hi medusa,
this i like, dark, dark stuff. :)

i can tell you coming across a dead crow can be scary. Once i ran across one while cycling on the road, and nearly lost control of the bike.

9:35 PM  
Blogger Pat Paulk said...

Harsh realities, no matter how hard we try to tint out, are always there. Excellent poem Medusa!!

10:26 PM  
Blogger floots said...

beautiful imagery
nice one

2:28 AM  
Blogger Medusa aka expiringpoet said...

dsnake,
I can imagine! Doesn't help that crows always have such bad rep and they look pretty scary naturally, worse when they're dead!

Pat,
thank you kind sir!

Floots,
Glad you liked it, thank you!

3:22 PM  
Blogger Don Iannone, D.Div., Ph.D. said...

So well seen, and described!

7:43 PM  

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