Under Skin
I remember your final goodbye
Left me searing numb everywhere except
For my heart where pain rubbed
like splinters disintegrating
under skin
Left me searing numb everywhere except
For my heart where pain rubbed
like splinters disintegrating
under skin
posted by Medusa aka expiringpoet at 12:53 AM
5 Comments:
This is really nice! It's always horrable to say goodbye.
Splinters hurt, even the little ones, especially in the heart. Very good!!
Awwww, very well done, my friend! :o)
That was a very clever use of splinters as a metaphor. The image conjured by the words made me crinch.
Andrew,
Yes, if only we never had to :)
Pat,
Yes it's the little, sneaky, nasty ones that cause so much pain..yow!!!!
Jon,
Thank you my super-talented friend :)
Liz,
Thank you, it did me too as i was re-reading it :)
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